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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-08-23 08:03 AM



did you read the trees
when they sent you words
with their leaves

when the earth mother whispered
through their roots
and they were dancers

making music with bird wings
and wind string strum
they were the dark pools there

under stone mouth poems
did you hear them talking
with their hands

wearing gloves of night linen

_______________

Dark

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Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2004-08-23 08:09 AM


did you read the trees
when they sent you words
with their leaves
========================
under stone mouth poems
did you hear them talking
with their hands
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YEEEEEEESSSSSSSSS!!!!

yessssss...and I hear your poetry on the wind whispers as well...and you will already know I am keeping this one.

( you rock)

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2004-08-23 08:26 AM












LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

3 posted 2004-08-23 09:06 AM


under stone mouth poems
did you hear them talking
with their hands

wearing gloves of night linen

natures sounds, all exposed by you and your
astute perceptions, articulating the other dimentions
wonderfully soothing write
and yes, the tree voices love to smile



Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

4 posted 2004-08-23 09:22 AM


God, I love every single line in this poem, yes i hear them Dark one

it's a keeper

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

Kahlil
Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881

5 posted 2004-08-23 09:24 AM


I feel the bird wing flutter
of the music
on the wind

in your words

K

Sunshine
Administrator
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
6 posted 2004-08-23 09:36 AM


Methinks you and Moth Queen ought to duet...she with her poignant photos...you with your whisper words and sigh songs...



it would make a heckuva duet...

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
7 posted 2004-08-23 09:51 AM


wearing gloves of night linen


love the thought

M

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
8 posted 2004-08-23 11:27 AM


You amaze me.  

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
9 posted 2004-08-23 12:47 PM


nice
Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
10 posted 2004-08-23 12:50 PM


Yes, DS....loud and clear!  Also softly in whispered dear.  
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