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Dear John
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Dear John |
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sneaker_girl New Member
since 2003-10-30
Posts 2 |
Dear John, I was your love and number one the apple of your eye till she came along strutting her stuff. You fell for her lies hook link and sinker. And... Someday when you see the truth you'll coming crawling back, and I'll be waiting no more. Leah |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
As your words say. Life is not easy...someone crying, someone smiling. Thanks for sharing with us. BonBon  |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
welcome and props on your poem , love on the rocks ...always hurts ~w |
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brezee Member
since 2003-06-02
Posts 140 |
i can relate times ten haha the guy I'd write this to is named John , as well....isn't that something! haha well anywho, nice write...  ~*brezee*~ |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
you didn't beat around the bush with this at all, and that is indeed admirable. this isn't just a letter you never wanna come home to, but it's one you hope you never have to write... cheers and better times to you, sneaker gal. it's not that the future is near or far... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions, sneaker girl... Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Very nice write. Sad situation, on bothe sides i'm sure. Good one! JL |
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msflame Member
since 2002-05-21
Posts 188 |
oh, those Dear John letters. Good post. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
It will be his loss...Well said and has happened to many of us... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
good write |
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