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Mon Cherie
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Land of Never-ending Summers

0 posted 2004-08-22 10:50 AM


I cannot put in words
What I feel today
It just keeps getting worse
Unwilling to go away

I left this big nest
That feels so loving and warm
To fly out to the horizon
And feel the sun's warmth

Was it meant to be?
Was I fated to leave?
I am so lost and weak
Sinking quickly to my knees

Maybe one day I will know
Mayhap I would finally see
What is meant to be
My fate and destiny

Until then please...
Please protect me
Keep me safe from harm
So scorching is the sun's heat

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

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1 posted 2004-08-22 12:14 PM


we're all lost out there...you're not alone
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2 posted 2004-08-23 04:18 PM


In time when healing starts, funny how these answers come.  Take care.
Mon Cherie
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3 posted 2004-08-25 10:41 AM


Thanks for the encouragement. I'll find my way out somehow... I always do...

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

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4 posted 2004-08-25 03:16 PM


Fear and fresh air!
A heady combination.

Take a deep breath . . .

-glider-

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2004-08-25 07:44 PM


NIce writing...James
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6 posted 2004-08-26 04:33 AM


yep...lost as can be
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