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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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You're a myriad of mood, almost bipolar, sobbing with april rain, knocking against eachother as march ravages through, light and carefree your fingers of green strum the summer breeze, and shelter all that rests upon your arms, and shoo with the currents of bay bouquets of mixed paisley leaving in september's song, and o how you celebrate the snow !! then shiver long after, in its frost; my dear you are full of ambition and hindsight, wise as a mother hen, young with love, nursing your newborn spring, part martyr, part dramaqueen, you are a pardox to a fault, you mimic me, at these crossroads between, where i am, for the moment, now caught. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, it seems I am forever surrounded by bipolars. So many in my family, and a few friends. *sigh* I relate to much in this write. Thanks for sharing it. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
youve used very beautiful imagery... this reads like a painting that makes you cry every time you lay eyes on it. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Whether a season or a personality...can each be explained within this poem. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
reminds me of myself in a way |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
You know, the seasons do represent us in so many ways, I mean each of us are bipolar in our own way . . . many of us can tack ourselves to one season . . . but I find if you look closely, we are all that encompasses Mother Nature herself. Who ever said bipolar was a bad thing? *grin* This is beautiful writing, which I have missed . . . |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
I think I know this person… Great write!! JL  |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Mmm, yes, the shifting of moods, like that of the seasons. I like this analogy. SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
we all have mood swings, different characters named happiness, surprise, anger, hurt, fear... well done, enjoyed. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
well said  |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Verrrrrrrrrrrry Interesting! |
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msflame Member
since 2002-05-21
Posts 188 |
Excellent expression of a disorder that plagues many. (funny, when I clicked on to reply a pop up ad for this disorder came across my screen) |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
WONDERFUL poem, Michelle! A keeper!  ....jo |
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