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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2004-08-21 11:13 AM

In utter silence
birds and butterflies
close the season,
open the sky;

the weeds that swayed,
stand at attention now
tall as straws,
drink the blues above them
contemplate next winter's thaw;

i walked for miles;

on moonshine
and intoxication,

through summer's fields,
unchartered,

and celebrate you now
on august's time;

quite soon, your call
to fruition comes,

and sad to say,
i can only call you
a pretty flower, dressed
in bridal lace of ivory,

we never knew eachother's names.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-08-21 12:20 PM

sometimes it's better that way

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2004-08-21 04:12 PM

this reminded of the seasons,
how they quickly pass us by . . .

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2004-08-21 04:37 PM

InkyOne~
I adore the lacy delicacy of your thoughts~
Leading me tenderly through your worded wonders~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2004-08-21 05:10 PM

Inkedgoddess....you write such lovely words about nature and this one took me back to an August in 1969 and the rolling hills of Ohio. Lovely poem, as always, *hugs*....jo

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2004-08-21 05:13 PM

Well done,  love the vision you paint.  Good
ending,  though sure would have been nice
if you knew...  But this way gives it more
power in the ending.

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

6 posted 2004-08-21 06:07 PM

pretty picture painted with words...good job

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

7 posted 2004-08-21 10:47 PM

thanks guys
and suzieQ
how sweet to see you on the blue
would love to hear you sing here to us again

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

8 posted 2004-09-16 01:27 PM

Outstanding ending here inkdgoddess, Enjoyed the write...and thanks for your very nice comment re: my last post here.

The Best,

wayne

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

9 posted 2004-09-16 01:31 PM

How beautiful...with a great ending!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

10 posted 2004-09-16 01:32 PM

Very beautiful Michele...
I'm glad I didn't miss this one as you posted it while I was on vacation.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

11 posted 2004-09-16 07:13 PM

thanks for stopping in kids
always happy to see you

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