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Paths & Shadows |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Paths & Shadows It starts sometimes with but a step or two, here or there, and then I come back around me to find the center again, here, when time leans out and I am but a circle again; my rut begins to seem deeper If I question the trace of me, a footstep, if even seen in the dirt of today, let be tomorrow’s findings by anyone else who might be looking for the things one would search for here, now, and somehow the path seems to wind around, back to myself again to here and now to today and you.  Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Lovely wander in the garden of your thoughts. Inspirational and loving write. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
A very creative poem, word/art, indeed....  Crooked path or straight, all lines curve and return, back to the same place.. Well done, Karilea...love the ending... --------ice/ford ><> |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
are those deer tracks? lovely write....beautifully done! loved the format |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
It touches one, and had to me, many different meanings. Some of them that come to mind related to human emotions, others to human actions, and deeds. Nice presentation Karilea. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Oh  This is genius the way you showed your thoughts and words! love ya SIL......jo |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea I know that path....I'm still walking on it...perhaps there's bench ..we could sit together on for awhile? |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
You hadda' know I'd live this one! Beautiful stuff! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Very nice -- good presentation. I like the concept. SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
this is an awesome little layout... enjoyed reading this, though it made me a bit dizzy.... you would think i was used to it LOL |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Too cool! Too smart! Too Good! Great write Sunshine. JL She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
oh....I am so glad this came back.. indeed... the circle of life, tis a wonderful thing yes? Love it mum. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Visualy and emotionaly stimulating! Eric |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
If I question the trace of me, a footstep, if even seen in the dirt of today, let be tomorrow’s findings by anyone else who might be looking for the things one would search for here, now, and somehow the path seems to wind around, back to myself =========================== me thinks you answered your own question... very cool and clever writing and presentation Kari... ( are those Konnies foot prints) HINT HINT  |
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