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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain 
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 the gift by crystal moonglow she hungers writing herself into secret places curving wishes around corners marked by soul-prints you've left behind no poet, just woman bound by the laces on her silent tongue only the inkpulsescar will open her world to you ©sdt'04 "Kind words can be short and easy to speak, but their echoes are truly endless." |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
snow, the words and images in this are live, vivid and real. Great Poetry! Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this describes many of us here, yes good write |
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barbaraj Member
since 2003-01-24
Posts 139Nova Scotia, Canada |
 truly a great poem, Snow.... an excellent write I hope that when the world comes to an end, I can breathe a sigh of relief, because there will be so much to look forward to... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"by crystal moonglow she hungers writing herself into secret places curving wishes around corners marked by soul-prints you've left behind no poet, just woman bound by the laces on her silent tongue only the inkpulsescar will open her world to you" It is always a treat to read one of your creations. This inkpulsecar is truly a gift!  .......jo |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
cool like a winters first snowfall .... |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Hello Snow. Love it! What a wonderful piece. The image has me thinking. LOL! I can't post what the thoughts are here though. (Wink!) No seriously this is a great piece. It makes me want to read it again and again. Asorbing each nuance 'til tip of tongue is alive with the flavor of the words. Mmm...now that has me thinking that line would make a great poem. (Snicker!) Love you...your buddy Kevin. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
kev.. you know you're going to have to share with me those thoughts now, don't you? :-) ... you're right, that line is a poem waiting to be ... Love, ~S jo, inpulsescar, was very important to this piece. i'm so happy it found it's way to you. each of your comments means so much, thank you all !! snow "Kind words can be short and easy to speak, but their echoes are truly endless." |
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