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JL
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0 posted 2004-08-20 04:17 PM


Intelligent Design

Determination of fact for design is within the Universe.
This super molecule some might say is our human home,
or yet, our hearse where humanity’s epitaphs are buried and hung.

To make an account reclaimable, it first must be attainable.
And not a secondary text made fame of by philosophy.

Preponderance of eyewitness generation’s sequential notations
must conclude its evaluation within all manuscripts of that age’s validity.
And, against a comparison one to another,
however, with fewer abstract thought…

Spoken passion can be weighty, if, presented with its written record.
Yet with eyewitness testimony, its transaction is an edict of truth.
Otherwise our very own past is merely an idiot’s philosophical whim…

While that era, here spoken of, had no provision for sight to be given
to this new age, thus, passing along only manuscript,
and an oral tradition, thus anthropology would be founded
to shovel into all humanity’s grave,
this earth,
in search of eye pleasing truth...

Continuity is in
the minor transcript related to its original manuscript,
and spoken word,
creating a historical fact in a secondary,
forgoing philosophical skew…

In a preparation of an account there-after,
each instance, would be secondary to its original…
The test is in that comparison.
Original transcript to secondary
To present…

The spoken manuscripts are there as is each un-dug grave.
Eye witnessed, spoken, and written in the singular original,
And documented by its grave establish in the earth,
dug-up by anthropologist.
Where else could it possibly go?

Although the graves will wait to be made alive for examination,
as will the spoken and written-of historical events,
the Prophets will not
as this age’s time is short
“Life is a tale, told by an idiot, full of sound and fury, signifying nothing.”
~William Shakespeare's Macbeth

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iliana
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1 posted 2004-08-21 06:26 PM


Very deep and interesitng poem, JL,...clicking library for further reading.   ....jo
Midnitesun
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2 posted 2004-08-22 12:22 PM


Wow, I loved this write; so much to ponder, so much to remember.
But I never did agree with William's assessment.

Also, this is up for Q's:
quote:
Spoken passion can be weighty, if, presented with its written record.
Yet with eyewitness testimony, its transaction is an edict of truth.
Otherwise our very own past is merely an idiot’s philosophical whim…

Just want you to know, I'm really pondering this part. Tough work for this brain on a Saturday night after a hectic day. LOL, perhaps I can comment further in a day or two.

LeeJ
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3 posted 2004-08-23 09:23 AM


just goes to prove, we've got to simply believe without any scientific reality

An outstanding write JL...thanks for writing and sharing...

Hugs..
Me

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4 posted 2004-08-23 12:33 PM


this leaves much to think about
Martie
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5 posted 2004-08-23 12:38 PM


JL

Thought-filled and food for thought...much enjoyed!  Well done!

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