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Flower Song
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Flower Song |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Before the roses fade, before their crimson blush grays away to dust, before their heavy scent drifts into memory, once let me feel loved. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
hearing in this, a soft plaintive cry |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
mmmm.. this i like... very much |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
aches so deep, but so beautiful |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Midnitesun, Cpat, and muted, thank you so much for letting me know you read it. I appreciate it more than you can know. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Nan, this is achingly wonderful. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Pilgram There is a haunting in these words, the ghosts of things past seem to appear, as summer wanes....This poem is filled with that feeling ..of something lost, but hope to regain, still remains .. Enjoyed ------ice ><> Come read to me some poem, |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, Ice took my sentiments and laid them down beautifully, as did you this poem. Well done, Nan |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
and maybe just once is enough, ey? |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Ahhhhh .... bravo! This could not be better!  .....jo |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nan~ This is just about as delicately lovely as they come~ Your talent spills softly down the page~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Sighhhhhh, just sighh. I'm keeping this. The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
forgot to check button library now The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
um....forgot to *click*  |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Thanks guys, that's so nice of you. This is one of those poems that just came to me. I put a half-polish on it and wrote it down. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Oh, I know this song well... used to sing all 143 verses through off key sobs. *S* How beautifully you write this longing! *S* |
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