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Pillow Talk |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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"I’ve nothing more to offer you." You whispered as you walked slowly past the bed. I propped my head up in my hands and said, "You’ve already given me what I needed most." "But I haven’t given you what you asked for." And as you sighed, sinking onto the edge of the bed, I propped myself up and said, "But you’ve given me what I wanted most." When every second counts, stop counting. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
You are surely are a romantic! Kacy, I liked those last two lines....makes a lot of sense and we all too often forget.  ....jo |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This is excellent-a few words to show an entire relationship. Excellent. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"When every second counts, stop counting." Very cool line Kacy...  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Certainly don't count on your fingers that is for sure! Kacy, Kacy, you old romantic you! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
that's all I can say 'bout these replies |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(chuckling) sometimes it doesn't take much... just enough to get us by... nicely done ma'am |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, silently smiling here |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
oh...a silent smile.. now that brings to mind a line or two..lmao... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
savedyes, I'm saving you  laughing here, as it's already sitting here, well protected from your delete key |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Loved the romantic touch of this, Kacy! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Martie, thank you! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice pillow talk...James |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 thank you, romantic poet James |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
yes, ya hit me in the solar plexus with this one. :-P and it reminds me of... well let's just say this is a slice of real life, and i love it. it's not that the future is near or far... |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Truth. Sometimes a poem of yours reaches me so intimately with the absolute, utter truth. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Ethan, hope nothing got hurt in the process. Ed, glad to share a heartbeat moment. |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Lovers speaking words Needing sounds that need no speech Time does not matter Nicely said. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Oh yes, indeed...how perfectly you say it...Wonderful... |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Sounds of beautiful thoughts, from what sounds like a beautiful heart! Great poetry!! JL  |
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