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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2004-08-20 08:36 AM



gentle in ballet shoes
and orthopedic braces
would the wind allow

leaves to be brittle
and not to break
when the swallow pretends

to be a butterfly


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Janet Marie
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1 posted 2004-08-20 08:53 AM


oh my...........
big ole moth sigh.......
*keeping this one*

LeeJ
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2 posted 2004-08-20 08:54 AM


tremendous....
Kahlil
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3 posted 2004-08-20 09:09 AM


very touching, tender
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4 posted 2004-08-20 09:11 AM


a gentle gift, this...
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with you
5 posted 2004-08-20 09:16 AM


yeah.....

Susan Caldwell
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6 posted 2004-08-20 09:36 AM


yep..you get a big *sigh* from me as well.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

passing shadows
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7 posted 2004-08-20 01:37 PM


love your mind
Martie
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8 posted 2004-08-20 01:55 PM


DS

Delightfully and tenderly written.  

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Gaia
9 posted 2004-08-20 01:57 PM


this one flew past me earlier
but now that I caught it
I'm keepin it
kewl

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10 posted 2004-08-22 09:49 AM


Yes, of course. How could it not?

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Susan
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walking the surreal
11 posted 2004-08-23 11:34 AM


An interesting thought, this.  My mind chews on the imagery, tasting the flavors that it brings --

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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