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Daniel J D
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0 posted 2004-08-20 01:56 AM



A moment to reflect
Life is surely, seeing a smile.
I found courage one day
As I sat and greeted you.
You made me laugh, and took away my pain.

You may not know it, but you are my quiet angel
You may not see my dream, but I see your beauty
I was touched by your honesty
I could see in your eyes a depth of comfort

Not often do you come by, but you were there
And when hearts come to beat, dreams come true
You are mystical, you are life, and very rare
Within you I see the silence and tranquility
That only the closed eyes of Buddha releases


Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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1 posted 2004-08-20 02:50 AM


see, this is what connection is all about.
"Within you I see the silence and tranquility
That only the closed eyes of Buddha releases"

if you find this in yourself as well as someone else you are a blessed person! beautiful poem and you should share this with the one who inspired it.

Really enjoyed this

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2 posted 2004-08-20 03:51 AM


beautiful
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3 posted 2004-08-21 12:40 PM


Enjoyed...James
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4 posted 2004-08-21 11:14 PM


This is really nice....must really be someone special!
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5 posted 2004-08-22 02:01 AM


I found courage one day
As I sat and greeted you.
You made me laugh, and took away my pain


...
pure poetry., loved the whole thing
~wolfy

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6 posted 2004-08-22 02:20 AM


beautiful poem daniel

I hope that when the world comes to an end, I can breathe a sigh of relief, because there will be so much to look forward to...

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7 posted 2004-08-24 08:55 AM


You may not know it, but you are my quiet angel
You may not see my dream, but I see your beauty
I was touched by your honesty
I could see in your eyes a depth of comfort
Daniel, do you realize just how beautiful this is.
It is sooooo very good to read you again.

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8 posted 2004-08-24 09:01 AM


You have touched something mystical and gorgeous. Thanks for posting this.
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9 posted 2004-08-24 10:14 AM


Your words were very calming.


I enjoyed them

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10 posted 2004-08-24 10:45 AM


Ahh...A mystical beauty that touches the soul and breathes a vision of wonder...Wonderful writing...

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