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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2004-08-20 12:37 PM


Meatloaf

I like her
and she likes me.
Who said dreams
never come true.
It had to
be me.
But she's
making me swoon
and I'm changing
my tune.
When I like
what I see
all my kisses
are free.
Sweetheart there's
no limit for you.
We gotta  make
the most of this night,
before this night
is through.

JamesLee
August20
2004

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JamesMichael
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2 posted 2004-08-21 12:08 PM


Thank you passing shadows....James
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3 posted 2004-08-23 03:46 PM


your such a sweet romantic



msflame
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4 posted 2004-08-23 09:44 PM


How utterly sweet and romantic this is.
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5 posted 2004-08-24 11:31 AM


Aye, this is so romantic! "when I like what I see All my kisses are free" hehe...

_,,,^.^,,,_
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6 posted 2004-08-24 11:34 AM


a smile maker....
JamesMichael
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7 posted 2004-08-24 07:20 PM


Thank you MGROVES, msflame, Mon Cherie and Gentle Spirit for the nice responses...James
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