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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2004-08-20 12:26 PM


That Moon

That moon...
sure look nice tonight.
It's framed by rain clouds
but it's still shining bright.
I picked a fine time for my
honey to be holding me tight,
with lots of kisses
to share (give)
under the moonlight.

JamesLee
August17
2004

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-08-20 01:13 AM


yes, it does
Pilgrimage
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2 posted 2004-08-20 03:02 PM


This is nicely romantic. I like it.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

JL
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since 2004-04-01
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3 posted 2004-08-20 04:45 PM


WooHoo!  Sounds like a great time to be in the light of the moon.

Good one.

JL


JamesMichael
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4 posted 2004-08-21 12:08 PM


Thank you passing shadows, Pilgrimage and JL for the nice responses...James
Verve
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5 posted 2004-08-21 02:09 PM



heh.. its so sweet! wish i cld have a moment like tat with my other half too..


"Who knows what evil lurks in the heart of Man?"

iliana
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6 posted 2004-08-21 03:22 PM


mmmmmm....sweet!   ....jo
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