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Lovers Rendezvous

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Startime55
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Lovers Rendezvous

Wet touches familiar face
silently like tiny tears
Thoughts formed in a magic place
bring to mind forgotten years

Soft grass bends beneath bare feet
walking in this forest glen
Running deer escape so fleet
baby foxes seek their den

As gentle winds kiss green leaves
mind remembers song caress
In her soul she still believes
a gift from the heart does bless

Shadow walks ahead, unclear
parting walls of cloud thatís formed
Shines on ageless face, so dear
in a mist of love transformed

Time does not burn off what was
a fantasy woven true
As birds sing and when bees buzz
the lost lovers rendezvous

Karen Mc Neil
Startime
© Copyright 2004 Karen Mc Neil-Tomayer - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
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1 posted 08-19-2004 09:44 PM       View Profile for Magnus   Email Magnus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Magnus

As you would say...and have,  many many times
before....BRAVO!

Well done Karen,  I knew you still had the
touch...

Great write....

OK Soleil....are ya happy now....??
ctowen
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2 posted 08-19-2004 09:59 PM       View Profile for ctowen   Email ctowen   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ctowen's Home Page   View IP for ctowen

Hmmm ...

     soft as barefeet on grass!!  

                there's a treat by itself

       always good to read you
Suetang
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3 posted 08-19-2004 10:41 PM       View Profile for Suetang   Email Suetang   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Suetang

Karen

Your words of love and romance always leave me floating on air.  This was so very beautiful.

Take care........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

JamesMichael
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4 posted 08-20-2004 12:22 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Silky...one of my favorites...James
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awesome rhyme scheme! wonderful theme!
LeeJ
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Time does not burn off what was
a fantasy woven true
As birds sing and when bees buzz
the lost lovers rendezvous

I loved this...bringing hope to many hearts with a softness of understanding..lovely
Earth Angel
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Oh, that was absolutely lovely! My goodness, how I enjoyed reading this touching and romantic poem!

Beautifully expressed, Dear Time With the Stars. Stars



EA
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Susan Caldwell
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8 posted 08-20-2004 09:43 AM       View Profile for Susan Caldwell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan Caldwell

Very well done!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

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Thanking you for sharing this one, Karen, as it buzzed me with a delicious memory.
Martie
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Karen

"Shadow walks ahead, unclear
parting walls of cloud thatís formed
Shines on ageless face, so dear
in a mist of love transformed"

Beautiful in thought and flow!
Sunshine
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11 posted 08-20-2004 10:14 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

A beautiful song, Karen...
I enjoyed the quiet peace of it.
inkedgoddess
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this has a way about it, very nice
wandering glider
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aloft


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Ageless, as fantasies are meant to be.

-glider-
iliana
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Really nice, Karen.  Enjoyed!   ....jo
longte
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15 posted 05-11-2005 07:04 AM       View Profile for longte   Email longte   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for longte

I have just read quite a few of yours

This one touches something

thankyou

Live It

 
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