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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-08-19 03:55 PM



if it is I, you do not see
it is me, just being me
too warm right now in useless flee
of circled thoughts
in rhyming lea

words and words keep round and round
no movement left or right is found
useless thoughts in mind abound
for it is I, you do not see
but it is me...just being me


M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving
1 posted 2004-08-19 03:58 PM


this is whimsy, and it suits you
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2 posted 2004-08-19 04:16 PM


MsWynter~
And YOU dear lady ... keep those thoughts circling~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2004-08-19 06:55 PM


Just feeling a bit blue today...

thanks

M

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Gaia
4 posted 2004-08-19 07:11 PM


blue can be such a beautiful color, M
I'll wish for you a smiling blue

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5 posted 2004-08-19 08:37 PM


To aid in releasing your blue...sort of
thought of a new song..."Take This Blue
and Shove It!"   Hope you have a brighter
day....Hang in there M.

Startime55
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6 posted 2004-08-19 09:45 PM


Keep being you for even when words go round and round you are just perfect the way you are...**hugs**

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8 posted 2004-08-20 05:54 AM


It may be blue but nicely written..thank you..

Goldenrose.

LeeJ
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9 posted 2004-08-20 08:30 AM


wishing you a Friday filled with sunshine and dreams come true.


Pilgrimage
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10 posted 2004-08-20 02:58 PM


Always be you, always!

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

JL
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11 posted 2004-08-20 04:51 PM


I love this “Words and Words” and it’s rhyme and rhyme.
And I have no doubt this is you being you.  Great poem, really enjoyed!!

JL



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in the shadows
12 posted 2004-08-20 06:12 PM


"words and words keep round and round
no movement left or right is found
useless thoughts in mind abound"

I really like this!

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13 posted 2004-08-20 09:11 PM


Hello Maureen. It's good to read you again.
And, thanks for thinking of me and sending the email.
I appreciate you.
Hugs,
Ethel

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14 posted 2004-08-20 11:28 PM


"words and words keep round and round
no movement left or right is found
useless thoughts in mind abound"


So easy to dismiss it all,
but mayhaps this stays the fall.

-glider-

Chanson
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15 posted 2004-08-21 10:57 AM


Keep the words...and words...and words....coming. I enjoy reading you, my friend.
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