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"A Poem with no name"
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"A Poem with no name" |
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James McInerney Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 83 |
"A Poem with no name" Upon my last breath may I be punished no more, If your love be that of a sword, so strong and forgiving, Then let it strike thy heart with a mortal blow. Alas, worry not my dear, For no marks or scars will appear across my skin, Your beauty bestows no pain upon this body that lay before you, And contempt dare not dwell here. May your name be whispered upon my dying lips, like that of dreams, Where beauty resides knowing loves true form, Admist heaven. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
romantic *sighs* here  sweetly written somewhat sad as well |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You've been missed... and this is why. Welcome home, James. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
James~ So whimsically beautiful~ *sigh* *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This read like a whisper in my ear...lovely! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nicely done James...so much passion within this poem... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Name or no name...it shouts classic!!!! |
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