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Edder
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0 posted 2004-08-19 08:52 AM






© Copyright 2004 Edder - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-08-19 08:55 AM


oh my,look at you...SHINE.
yes, i knew i would enjoy this to bits...
you always always deliver a beautiful read.
and that photo is *gorgeous*

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2004-08-19 08:56 AM


Oh WOW!  This is outstanding and stunning!
1slick_lady
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3 posted 2004-08-19 08:58 AM


OMG !!!
wow oh wow
speechless really
(and that is hard to do)

ya done good ya did
do i ever say i am proud of you?

well...i am
see what waiting gets you

Sunshine
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4 posted 2004-08-19 09:08 AM


Now here's a pretty that leaves me happy...

thank you!

Startime55
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5 posted 2004-08-19 09:18 AM


Stunningly beautiful....This vision leaves the reader breathless...

Kahlil
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6 posted 2004-08-19 09:21 AM


...awesome...
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7 posted 2004-08-19 09:46 AM


stunning and penitrating wisdom
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8 posted 2004-08-19 09:51 AM


nice read
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9 posted 2004-08-19 09:51 AM


yes, I must agree, this is really beautiful!
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10 posted 2004-08-19 11:51 AM


Absolutely lovely, my friend... so good to see you posting again! *S*
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11 posted 2004-08-19 12:20 PM


dang! I'm impressed!!! I love this!!!
Susan Caldwell
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12 posted 2004-08-20 03:49 PM


Love both the picture and the words Ed!

(I replied now b/c you can't load it!) lol

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

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13 posted 2004-08-20 11:05 PM



watching this piece grow was a pleasure.
the way the words get to me never fades ... i'm glad i have another chance to tell you
how perfect it all is, biscuit.


~S

"Kind words can be short and easy to speak, but their echoes are truly endless."
--Mother Teresa

iliana
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14 posted 2004-08-21 12:16 PM


Edder, thank you for penning and sharing this very thoreavian piece.  Made my evening!   .....jo
JamesMichael
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15 posted 2004-08-21 12:26 PM


Enjoyed...James
Edder
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16 posted 2004-08-21 10:06 AM


Thank you all for the wonderful replies, they are truly appreciated.
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17 posted 2004-08-22 10:32 AM


A single sliver of such glory is all that's needed...and we are blessed with so many.

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>   ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>  ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº>    ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
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Martie
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18 posted 2004-08-22 05:16 PM


Gorgeous!
Bonnie j
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19 posted 2004-08-22 09:23 PM


Hello
What a lovely picture you have shared with us. Also a beautiful poem.
BonBon

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