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Where essence does exist
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Where essence does exist |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia 
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Somewhere in our being an essence does exist Which sometimes finds a way to touch although we might resist To leave us feeling joyous in a place of all so sweet Where all that’s pure grants us what in heaven we might meet The feeling of emotions, the tears that well the eyes The touch you offer freely that most days you just disguise A feeling all so calming, in aura with the mind Encompassed by a purity that we all wish to find Which triggers what’s inside us, to glider scope our view To fill our sight with colour that before we never knew To then just feel the wonders that we all were meant to know I don’t know how I got there, but again I want to go |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Enjoyed this Good as is but well might be swell, both work. No need to change a word done well. Gloom |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
needleess to say, in lieu of one of my posts this morning, felt like this spoke directly to me Mr. Rick...however, we posted at the same time...your night, my morning...see how poems so boldly speak to many in different ways... Lovely words of reassurance...and yes, I'm one of those people that hide true feelings and try hard to be brave. Smiles and hugs...wishing you a tremendous day ahead |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rick Well done my friend, well done. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Gloom, great to see you here, thank you so much for your words of rely, always very much appreciated. Dear Lee, nice again to see you here friend, I think that most of us hide what we truly feel, I write what I feel, but rarely if ever do I ever speak it. great to see you, be well and take care. Seymour, once again thank you for your reply, always good to see you here dear friend. To you all my friends, may you all be well and have a great week, again thank you. Sincerely Rick |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Ahhhh...you make the soul question and than give the answer that brings peace...BRAVO!!!... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I am always impressed by the clarity of your words... felt this, this morning *s M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Rick, you have an awesome way of feeling life and writing it |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Startime55, great to see you here, thank you so much for your reply my friend, it was lovely to read. nakdthoughts, wonderful to see you again, a great reply, thank you so much for that dear friend. Dear Dixie, the one I so often see, thank you so much once again for your reply, they are always a joy to read. To you all my friends, again thank you for your replies, each one is greatly appreciated. Sincerely Rick |
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