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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Fraying dress hems Disturbances gagging Alien visage, grounded near fires At the end of snowball bushes Ashes charring the edges Over glazed mouths Of haunt-like words Pacing about, like little lost birds Burning away breath as we knew it Black-and-blue marks on the ground Passing along extra moons None of which we found Some malfunction, I’m thinking Eating face forms drowning Thrusting emotions to and fro Over nights risen, dark & lonely now Where is the hillside that we climbed? It’s yellow light halo…diffused Cordwood stacked on the porch No fireplace to use Hallways unpainted Shadows feeble on the wall Dreams wrapped in another napkin Rubbing another belly softly He is her left hand The wick of a lantern Where alternate doors burst open Different sultry mouth of directions Firing the smokehouse |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
you are soo soo good love the way you write and tell all  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good write  |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
I do agree! Great write Lee J. JL |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
What a picture -- this one penetrates like smoke, couldn't keep all of it out (or in) even if I tried. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Your poetry is quite, quite unique lee....i love reading it..thank you.. Goldenrose. |
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