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MGROVES
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0 posted 2004-08-19 06:22 AM




a day without you
is like a day
without sunshine
your heart
speaks so warm
to mine
your words
are like a breath
of fresh air
giving life to my soul
i now share
my heart
my soul
i dont give
to just anyone
something
i've never done
my spirit kept
wild and free
now all live
as one
in perfect harmony
thats how deep
you touched me
i hid them
bound in chains
behind locked gate

i now believe
in destiny and fate
our souls are mates






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LeeJ
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1 posted 2004-08-19 06:26 AM


i now share
my heart
my soul
i dont give
to just anyone
something
i've never done
my spirit kept
wild and free
now all live
as one


Saving that light for a special someone
smiles and hugs...good thoughts here
positive and hopeful...nice

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2 posted 2004-08-19 06:32 AM


thank you so much


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3 posted 2004-08-19 10:00 AM


liked this a lot
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4 posted 2004-08-19 11:55 AM


your heart
speaks so warm
to mine
your words
are like a breath
of fresh air
giving life to my soul
i now share
my heart
my soul

What a beautiful write! *S* I like this very much! *S*

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5 posted 2004-08-19 12:15 PM


I believe in fate and destiny but also in choice too...

good write...good to see you feeling this way

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6 posted 2004-08-24 07:37 PM


Lovely...James
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7 posted 2004-08-24 09:59 PM


Agree with James -- lovely.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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8 posted 2004-08-26 08:28 AM


thanks for replies, dixie, yes definatly choice comes first, had enough bad ones


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9 posted 2004-08-26 09:17 AM


This is delightful and makes me want to believe in soulmates.
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10 posted 2004-08-26 09:20 AM


i now believe
in destiny and fate
our souls are mates

*smiling*  beautiful...

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11 posted 2004-08-26 09:25 AM


MGROVES
Well done enjoyed the read.

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12 posted 2004-08-26 09:31 AM


thankyou all very much


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13 posted 2004-08-26 11:35 PM


"i now share
my heart
my soul
i dont give
to just anyone"

I enjoyed this

HopeS
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14 posted 2004-08-27 12:47 PM


wonderful description of a soulmate , they do make you feel whole....soulmates are truly mates of heart and soul

Hope

JamesMichael
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15 posted 2004-09-07 07:47 PM


One more time....James
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16 posted 2004-09-07 07:58 PM


One word, and that may not be enough...

Beautiful!!!

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17 posted 2004-09-07 08:00 PM


Marvelous.

- Haze

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18 posted 2004-09-07 08:02 PM


thankyou all so much

    


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19 posted 2004-09-07 08:29 PM


Yes,  I think all these parts would fit
nicely on a resume of someone being sought
out to be a soulmate...

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20 posted 2004-09-07 08:50 PM


Marsha, this was so tender.  Much enjoyed.   ......jo
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21 posted 2004-10-05 03:33 PM


thank you all for your warm replies


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