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Lantern Lights |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Lantern Lights On passing highway lantern lights There’s always one shows brighter bright One that sends a rosy glow That lights you up from head to toe Its yield it seems a greener green With fields of flowers never seen Butterflies of mystic flight And fireflies that light the night The sky is lit with hews of gold And odors that entice your bold The essence of a love so deep It puts you in a magic sleep It holds you in a spell of goal Creeps into your very soul Reality is put aside For ecstasy of loves abide A coupling that forms a core That takes you to forevermore |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And if in forevermore I should find a more willing, witty, clever mind I know that my heart would heave a SIGH... for I would meet poet, eye to eye... ~*~    |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Sy, this was magnificent and one of my favs of yours...tremendous write, inspiring, uplifting, allowing and giving...Randy is a very lucky gal...your insight is very wise. G'Day to you all...hugs and smiles |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I think it be ye who is glowing by light of lantern, Sir Sigh...  A lovely write. Sweet dreams forevermore, EA  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Why I greet you every morning, my dear. LeeJ Did I forget to tell you that this Randy is my alter ego? Good morning sweet and thank you.  Earth Angel I don't know if Angels dream but if they do have a sweet one on me. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Its yield it seems a greener green With fields of flowers never seen Butterflies of mystic flight And fireflies that light the night The title made me think of fireflies... the poem makes me think of where I'd like to be... and with whom. *S* This is a delight, my friend... well done! *S* |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
So true. What a nice thought this is to take with me today. Thank you, sweet man! ....jo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Thank you love. iliana May it be the best of days. |
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Pell Member
since 2001-09-16
Posts 134Pacific NW |
The sky is lit with hews of gold And odors that entice your bold The essence of a love so deep It puts you in a magic sleep This sparks a memory for me, of going home to Florida after many years. I couldn't get over how sweet and furry the air smelled! Thank you for the ponder, Sy, you've brightened my day. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
It holds you in a spell of goal Creeps into your very soul Reality is put aside For ecstasy of loves abide Ah, to be held in this spell forever.  Thankyou for this lovely read Seymour. hugs, Chris "At one glance |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes! good write! |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Reality is put aside For ecstasy of loves abide **sigh** the perfect reality is the ecstasy of love with the world that is created by it...I love this poem...It is absolutely wonderfull... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Pell Right now it is raining, but it's a lovely rain. Chris, Thank you for the lovely reply. passing, Thank you Startime55 Love your replies. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
and forevermore we shall adore the words and wit of what you have writ upon the pages blue. Thanx Sir Sy... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Barry, Thank you my friend. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
What a beautiful day you wrote of! And a beautiful poem. Of course, written by a poet of the same measure  Loved it. Always, Alyssa Poems are made by fools like me, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Alyssa, Thank you so much you are a dear. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi Seymour  Beautiful rhyme and beautiful poem. I really enjoyed reading it. I hope all is well with you from the hurricane. Hugs, Ethel |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
beautiful simply beautiful  |
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Kevo Member
since 2004-06-02
Posts 466Navarro County, Texas, USA |
A beautifully sincere write that lifts the spirits up no matter who you are. It was quite the passionate poem that I enjoyed this morning. Kevin |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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