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purple was the sky
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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Purple was the sky until the blues of you stopped by, and I never saw a true rainbow until today. But you were always a neon light that did shine in front of me, though I could not see clearly enough, to follow you down that path. So I sit here wondering, is the sky still blue for you? |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Kacy, you said so very much in this short, colorful poem. I do love your writing. Hope you keep seeing the rainbows, girl!  ....jo |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
When that absent person Wakes to new horizons, Are his colors new? Or just as blue as you? Well written, Kacy, you've a touch for expressing heartaches. I hope they aren't all yours. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
A wondrous write, in which your soul is taking you by the hand and showing you something even greater...perspective and the desire to excel, is what I'm reading here...sad, and yet, knowing that everything evolves...and must...and if all is true love, it will return. Sending you hugs |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this pondering very much... sometimes, we just can't help but wonder. *S* |
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Pell Member
since 2001-09-16
Posts 134Pacific NW |
Oh Yeah, this is great! *kapow* Very well done Kacy  |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Purple was the sky until the blues of you stopped by, and I never saw a true rainbow until today. Oh, Kacy, this is just delicious! I love the way that you write. hugs, Chris |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Wonderful....you ponder with perfect vision...I love it... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
perfectly worded question...perfect poetic emotion |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) As always you write with such pure versatility and heart, sweet friend, poets can see the sky in any color I believe and I'm sure he has noticed hues bleed together in his imagination and heart also with your gentle spirit giving him welcome and solace, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Kazm Member
since 2003-11-13
Posts 99 |
I feel humble. There are so many poets here who write so well. Kaz |
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