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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain 
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 special thanks to my dear friend for the use of his photo. barbed tears dance on the edge of tomorrow's slice of me, my voice barbed in open quicksand, struggles, you blind ... slip past shut-up kiss me forward, home, into the curve of shoulder and whisper, where the only destination is, let go and breathe past the past lacking acustic wonder and doubt tongueraindreambraillearch skyward, clasping thunderclouds in your eyes, baby you complete this unfinished puzzle, i am, and fold buttercup daisies into my hair giving me poetry ... tongue to tongue healing with a hushtouchcatch-throatcry till the sky exhales, this voice ... released. ©sdt'04 "Kind words can be short and easy to speak, but their echoes are truly endless." --Mother Teresa |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
BRAVA! BRAVA! Brilliant, Snow! |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
kiss me forward, home, into the curve of shoulder and whisper, where the only destination is, let go and breathe past ~*~ a beautiful photo to accompany marvelous wordings... |
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Pell Member
since 2001-09-16
Posts 134Pacific NW |
I love the sense of urgency to this, the photo is a perfect backdrop to the words. Marvelous! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Another keeper!! Awesome! hugs, Chris "At one glance |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Beautifully written and perfectly portrayed... |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
HELL YEAH! I love this. And I am jealous I did not write it! LOL! Ms. Snow you are outstanding. One of the most amazing and prolific writers I have ever had the dpleasure of reading. Bravo my friend. **hugs moi** Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
kevin, after that sneak preview i had tonight, you have nothing to be jealous of! ~~hugs~~ thank you all so much!! snow "Kind words can be short and easy to speak, but their echoes are truly endless." |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Well done Snow, they complement each other very well. A very good write...yep it is! |
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