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Susan
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0 posted 2004-08-17 11:21 PM




Sing your song of seduction
Sweet serpent
Chanting softly the lines
Calling forth your quarry
With your hypnotic weave of rhyme

Silvered cadence dances
Echoing in empty hollows
Enticing . . .
Inviting . . .


Speak your luring words
Sweet ophidian
Wrapped in velvet tone
Slipping slyly from your tongue
Calling your quarry home

Sensual intonations slide
Washing across the void
Intriguing . . .
Tempting . . .


Entwine within your lithe lines
Sweet serpent
Embrace in tender caress
Spellbind in your bliss
Bid your quarry rest

“Stay with me my love
And in my essence abide
Enveloped . . .
Enthralled . . “.

“I am she –most beloved mistress”


s.a.t.


Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

[This message has been edited by Susan (08-18-2004 06:48 PM).]

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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2004-08-17 11:39 PM


I am highly curious as to what was the inspiration for this sultry and sensuous serpent song!

Snake 2 Music Note



Linda
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JamesMichael
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2 posted 2004-08-17 11:51 PM


Enjoyed...James
Susan
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3 posted 2004-08-18 12:45 PM


E.A. -Ah, the word Mistress began it.  And the snake, synonomous with seduction.  This is not just about the sexual kind, it could be money, addictions, sensations, etc.  And I love the slipping of esses across my tongue  

Also, I think of the Chinese "snake" astrological sign.  Being a snake is not a bad thing, it is a good thing.  Again, however, the snake is synonomous with sensuality.

James -- thanks  

Have a good night you two -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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