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Dead Battery
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Dead Battery |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Dead Battery My current needs more directness not connecting very well with reality shorting out as sweat meets skin and mind wishes to convert into more energy while the body slows to a stall M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this happens during great pain, grief, rejection and or/great trial and tribulation An exceptional way to describe the emotions of suffering. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it really does feel like that, doesn't it?  |
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Pell Member
since 2001-09-16
Posts 134Pacific NW |
Boy I can relate to this... and the need to recharge, somehow, some way. Terrific write  |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
My heart goes out to you...you have captured the pain perfectly...**hugs** |
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