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Goodbye Charley Goodbye
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Goodbye Charley Goodbye |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Goodbye Charley Goodbye he came with wordy destruction tearing apart everything he saw in furious razor blade letters un-content to just know he passed by marking his territory everywhere as if the Jones could keep up with the voice of his chatter a hot aired heart of velocity luring many to delicious temptation to be unmoved to the point of never and lost I run from arms that can not brace me where bricks are shaken from foundations for flattery in the wind will only bring you down |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
where flattery in the wind will only bring you down I've come of age where flattery means nothing anymore, and where actions really score... Intense write, made me think of battered woman and abusive husbands/wives... One does not have to be physically abused to be abused. Thank you for writing and sharing. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...as always your words quicken the breath and leave me wondering and full of wonder. Eric |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Hey slick lady! Nice to see your words still grace these pages! If you're not yourself, then there is no you. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Looks like we had poems coming from exactly the same place...though you were the one directly exposed to that storm. I hope your loss wasn't too great, and that your recovery will be quick. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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