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Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

0 posted 2004-08-17 09:55 AM



+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+
My vision clears, as years pass by,
~ Tho' my eyes may dim in sight,
For I gain in understanding,
And can "see" in waning light.

My heart and mind are open,
~ Pouring wisdom in my soul.
I need not eyes, to realize,
That I am part of "The Whole".
+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+

© Copyright 2004 Linda L. Dowd - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2004-08-17 10:02 AM


Earth Angel
You are a whole within a whole.

Startime55
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2 posted 2004-08-17 10:08 AM


Ah yes...as the years give us experience our hearts and souls open to the bigger picture of life around us...the older I get the more happy and content I feel...Wonderful writing as always flows from your talented pen...**hugs**

passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-08-17 12:50 PM


very nice
skyshine
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4 posted 2004-08-17 01:45 PM


Yeah, we're all part aren't we? Good work Linda.

~sky

Hold on, if you feel like letting go
Hold on, it gets better than you know....
~Good Charlotte

suthern
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5 posted 2004-08-17 02:20 PM


Such beautifully written truth...
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6 posted 2004-08-17 03:49 PM


Beautiful!

Eric

Corinne
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7 posted 2004-08-17 05:18 PM


A lovely, centered poem, a calming balm of a thing, this.


Corinne

Susan
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8 posted 2004-08-17 08:30 PM


Yes indeedybob, we all make the whole, though oft times we forget when caught up in self.  You wise little angel you --

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

iliana
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9 posted 2004-08-17 09:05 PM


And I can see that this is true, dear Earth Angel Linda!   KBHBLY   ~lily~
inkedgoddess
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10 posted 2004-08-17 10:27 PM


My heart and mind are open,
~ Pouring wisdom in my soul.
I need not eyes, to realize,
That I am part of "The Whole".
+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+

revelations coming with age; when do i start?

Mistletoe Angel
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11 posted 2004-08-18 03:19 PM




(does happy dance) Yay! Oh Linda, this made me smile as you not only see things so clearly and beautifully, but you also feel them with all your golden heart, and feeling is what helps one to appreciate the whole! (kiss on cheek) Yay, as always you are a special friend to us all, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Sunshine
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12 posted 2004-08-18 03:45 PM


So true, m'friend...so true.
Ethan Halo
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13 posted 2004-08-20 09:32 PM


insightful...brilliant.

it's not that the future is near or far...
the future's just so grim.

wandering glider
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14 posted 2004-08-20 10:54 PM


And the whole is part of us.

-glider-

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