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icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2004-08-17 09:49 AM



Summer’s lonely walk

through life’s gardens overgrown

Autumn’s end game waits

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just out of reach
1 posted 2004-08-17 10:03 AM


the last of summer
weaves through leaves of colour change
while late blooms bow heads


Startime55
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2 posted 2004-08-17 10:06 AM


As summer days come to an end this poem tells well how its death gives birth to autumn...

iliana
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3 posted 2004-08-17 11:34 AM


Good one!
LeeJ
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4 posted 2004-08-17 11:50 AM


and who knows what is yet to come?
wonderful write...but standing here with anticipation...

Do you know what will be?  smiles and hugs
Nice one!

passing shadows
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5 posted 2004-08-17 12:34 PM


nice...really nice one
Martie
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6 posted 2004-08-17 02:04 PM


icebox

I always begin feeling that loss in September....you've brought it a little early.  

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