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My Locket
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My Locket |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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My locket There is a locket in my pocket A golden reminisce of bliss A moment stored on my docket Woven in a reminisce A point of reckoning a steer A touch of twilight on the lie A luscious taste of cavalier Aura borealis sky The sound of sweetest violins Warmth that surges through the heart A shot of pure adrenaline A waking of a thing to start It is a treasure held in store A magic scarab there in scrawl An element of evermore The weaving of a lovers shawl Passing through a single goal Symbiosis of a soul |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
A shot of pure adrenaline A waking of a thing to start For me, your words are a shot of adrenaline A waking thing to start my day...thank you for this frame of mind...smiles and hugs |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
symbiosis of the soul oh my... sigh IS THAT TOO MUCH TO ASK FOR? grin..didn't mean to yell at you... you speak my language.  oooh. Two for that.  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
It is a treasure held in store A magic scarab there in scrawl An element of evermore The weaving of a lovers shawl =============================== And that verse defines your poetry my delightful poet prophet... and oh what a delight this was to read aloud... your rhyme scheme and meter is cadence candy Sybabers.   *ww*  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Sweet Scribe! There be not a line of this fine write, where I am left unimpressed!!!!!!!!!!! Your metre, metaphors, imagery, sentiments, use of alliteration ~ are all impeccable! May your skies be as colourful and electrifying as the aurora borealis! May the sounds that you hear be as sweet as those sung from a well-tuned, well-played violin. May your pocket be full of lockets full of loving memories. May all your relationships be symbiotic and everlasting. ...For you are a cavalier worthy of revere! ~ and of all the best life has to offer! Have a glorious day! I am gifting you with a scarab beetle for protection:   EA  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
kewl stuff master sy.. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Just popping back in to SAVE it!  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Aura borealis sky ~*~ Don't you know this lights my fire?   |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Seymour, another wonderful write, very much enjoyed dear friend, thank you for sharing this. Sincerely Rick |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ You are a gem. Hugs serenity, With all those kisses you have me flying. Hugs back Love ya Sy JM, Have I told you lately how much I WWRS Earth Angel, You speak like an Angel You read like an Angel You must be an Angel Dark, I think you're kewl too. Sunshine, I just plain old love ya. Rick, That's what every poet likes to read. Thank you |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ah, how lovely Seymour. I keep all of your words safe within my locket which is my heart. Hugs, Chris "At one glance |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, So happy to see you again. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
A romantic treasure of words that brings a vision of love to light....Soothing to the heart...Wonderful writing... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Startime55 Wonderful comment, thank you. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
pleasing write |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, Pleasant comment. |
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