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Blind Mans Bluff
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Blind Mans Bluff |
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~K~ Member
since 2004-07-27
Posts 148
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You need someone to listen I hear you You need some one to miss you I miss you You need someone to kiss to tear you from yourself to twist your words til they make sense so I kiss I tear and I twist Til there is nothing left still you persist Like you need some one to tell you lies well, I was lying when you said you need some one to try and I said I was trying You need someone to open up your eyes and so do I |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
from "Twister": "Still you continued with eyes closed to the impending disaster" then here.... in this poem the blind leading the blind how does one open their eyes? sometimes the dark is a safer place to hide. soemtimes you write things that make my tummy ache... and i dont know why! maybe you just know how to reach into the reader and find the parts of them that need discovering? |
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Kevo Member
since 2004-06-02
Posts 466Navarro County, Texas, USA |
Sometimes relationships can be excruciatingly frustrating. I had read several of your posts the last couple of days and the most extraordinary characteristic about your talent is your unparalleled ability to communicate so much and so clearly in so few words. Some of the most compelling, thought-provoking, memorable writings, statements, etc. have been one-liners. While yours is a few more lines than that, it is of the same caliber and on the same plane. It is short, concise, well-constructed, and clear...abundantly clear. Guys have a tendency to bask in ourselves, to seek approval. For the most part because we're a bunch of knuckleheads. I often feel like "Raymond" from "Everybody Loves Raymond". Good read and I really appreciated you sharing it. Your poetic friend, Kevin [This message has been edited by Kevo (08-17-2004 05:35 AM).] |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A gentle pursue of thought here... In the discovery of what someone else needs, so do we find our own. Although we all play a role in finding our true path, it was always to be that way. Enjoy your works very much. TD |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
~K~ Enjoyed the read. |
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Pell Member
since 2001-09-16
Posts 134Pacific NW |
quote: Wowser. That's it in a nutshell. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
in knowing who we are, takes us by the hand and lends our ears and feelings towards others, the perception of and the want to, give them our greatest gift ever... This was a clean sweep of all that is... |
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C? Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 190 |
me likey |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very good |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Tender punches... Well done, ~K~ |
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