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jellybeans
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0 posted 2004-08-16 02:48 PM


this one is for sunshine, for once she prompted my muse to write from my Lord's perspective.  I never forgot the prompting, but was not given the words until last night


Church

Sanctified hands lift on high
four walls fill with harmony.
Worship from God’s children rises
upward, in one accord.

The Almighty considers their voices
an offering of love that is pleasing.
Drawing closer to inhabit their praises
He is at once above and within.

© Copyright 2004 jellybeans - All Rights Reserved
Honeybunch
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1 posted 2004-08-16 02:51 PM


Very nice, Jellybeans.  
Sunshine
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2 posted 2004-08-16 02:54 PM


The last line is the telling line, young lady.  I am so very glad your heart listened...

and that you found it within yourself to share.  

Do you know how proud we are of you?

jellybeans
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3 posted 2004-08-16 02:55 PM


thank you honey

sunshine, yes, doubt covers the ears, but doubt doesn't stand a chance when He is in your heart's beating.....thank you lady

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4 posted 2004-08-16 02:56 PM


this is as beautiful as is your heart dear gal.  Hugs and peace to you.
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5 posted 2004-08-16 04:31 PM


Such a beautiful write... this one leaves smiles in my heart. *S*
jellybeans
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6 posted 2004-08-16 04:46 PM


thank you ladies, tis good to have a 'home' in which to find healing and peace...I hope my words do justice
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7 posted 2004-08-16 08:55 PM


Beautiful, jelly girl!   ...jo
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8 posted 2004-08-16 11:12 PM


JB...your words have always done more than justice...they stand alone, but they also gather...

You've a gift.

He watches.

So does your son.

jellybeans
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9 posted 2004-08-17 09:46 AM


thank you.....your encouragement helps me ...lots.....sigh...thank you
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10 posted 2004-08-17 12:52 PM


yes
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