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Sweet Summer (Back From California!!!!)
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Sweet Summer (Back From California!!!!) |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada 
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the summers breeze dances with my hair as i gaze longingly out the window places,people,cars,cities all flying past me like time life is like realizing your breathing. you never notice it's there, but when you do.. you beg for it to never end, to never stop breathing. gratefull, gratefull for the Californian sun, the warm nights, and clear skys. i've never been so aware of breathing in my life. -note- JUST GOT BACK FROM CALI!! yay!! its been a month and i'm glad to be home in Calgary! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
welcome back...good write! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
So true....enjoyed! .....jo |
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Kevo Member
since 2004-06-02
Posts 466Navarro County, Texas, USA |
Hey! I was on hiatus, too! But, instead of sunning myself in California (where I grew up), I spent the last month dealing with a computer virus and spending a couple hundred dollars trying to get back here to hear you gloat about your perfect vacation!!! Just kidding. No, I really was working on my computer and throwing money away for the last month. I was merely kidding about the vacation part! Good to have you back. And, good to be back myself. I look forward to reading your new posts inspired by the Golden State. Welcome home, Kevin |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
life is like realizing your breathing. you never notice it's there, but when you do.. you beg for it to never end, to never stop breathing. yup! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Now you can do some California dreaming...James |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Wonderful write! I hope you enjoyed your stay while you were here in Cali. I had to bump this one!! |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
exhale, a great read, thank you for sharing this, I really enjoyed. Good thoughts to carry me through the day. Sincerely Rick |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
She came to California, and left....worse yet, she's blonde! This does not compute....unless it's maybe that air thing....there is something about blonde air that is less than appealing..... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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