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choshi
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0 posted 2004-08-15 08:29 PM



Calling gulls
announce your awaited return
those dream-filled nights-
when we gazed at the full moon
shimmering on dew drops.

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1 posted 2004-08-15 08:42 PM


Sounds of an early morning, 4:00 a.m. time...
and the imagery is wonderful!

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2 posted 2004-08-15 09:23 PM


time dangles a wedged foot
till we are hanging over the raging
and see that the current
just might carry us
choshi

You share such loving thoughts.

peace dwells in the boat
oh not defined or named
the one that runs the rapids
and finds the calm

and still looks toward the place
where emergence rushes
following the sea bird

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3 posted 2004-08-15 10:13 PM


I heard them in the distance, Paul!  Lovely verse.      ....jo
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4 posted 2004-08-15 11:28 PM


A lovely write indeed. Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."


— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet

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5 posted 2004-08-16 12:17 PM


I wish that the gulls
would shimmer a little less
in reality


I couldn't help myself.

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6 posted 2004-08-16 01:49 AM


I knew this would be short and sweet
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7 posted 2004-08-16 03:18 AM


"Calling gulls
announce your awaited return
those dream-filled nights-
when we gazed at the full moon
shimmering on dew drops."
``````````````````````````````
Im left naked by night
bathed in only your light
asleep in the glimmered dew
drowning in reflection of you
and begging the morn to slip out of sight.

Id rather bask in lover's delight.



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8 posted 2004-08-16 08:12 AM


i just LOVE this !!!!!


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9 posted 2004-08-16 08:20 AM


Soooooo romantic! ~ and very emotive and visual! Beautiful write!



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10 posted 2004-08-18 04:34 PM




Calling gulls
announce your awaited return
those dream-filled nights-
when we gazed at the full moon
shimmering on dew drops.

we shimmer like dew drops
as we gaze at the moon
over the face of the pond
the silvergulls paint
our reflection

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11 posted 2004-08-18 06:20 PM


This carries me to that place. I feel like this poem is a personal gift for anyone to receive by reading it.
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