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Copperbell
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0 posted 2004-08-15 04:56 PM



On warm lush fields
  the rolls lie
    comfortable
Sleeping on the farmer's bed

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2004-08-15 05:08 PM


LOL, I see those sleepers every day.
an enjoyable read

ice
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2 posted 2004-08-16 05:00 AM


Very visual, love this....
The hay this year is excellent, that is if the farmers could gather it before it got wet...
enjoyed
-------ice
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Professor Gloom
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of Depression
3 posted 2004-08-16 05:25 AM


A field of green
Rolled up and put away
To the side of where it been
Awaiting another day..

Gloom

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displaced
4 posted 2004-08-16 11:52 AM


nice scene
Copperbell
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5 posted 2004-08-16 12:42 PM


It is an interesting thought - a field rolled up and put away...

Thanks for your comments - I appreciate them

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