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barbaraj
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since 2003-01-24
Posts 139
Nova Scotia, Canada

0 posted 2004-08-15 02:22 PM


If I could make just one wish,
And have it last forever,
You would take me in your arms,
And there I would always stay,
Your lips would be on mine,
Our bodies would unite,
Together we'd make the perfect rhyme

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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2004-08-15 04:37 PM


*s...yes that would certainly do it

M

Copperbell
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since 2003-11-08
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2 posted 2004-08-15 04:40 PM


I like this -
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2004-08-15 05:40 PM


Oh...do you only get one...I think I already used my wish up...James
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