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whiskey
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0 posted 2004-08-15 08:17 AM



As they fell from grey barked trees
Showing forth winters power
Cold wind blew
Swirling dead leaves
Piles upon frosted ground
Faintly hearing an  Angel cry
Black roses grow from the earth
Pain felt upon the breeze
Lonely girl sat facing a darkened Angel
Black wings Shadowing her
She speaks broken to her blessed one
Her Angel listens unspoken
With fierce tongue nature lashes out
Sending water toward the ground
droplets puddles glowing red
Crimson like the blood
Keeping her alive
Her Angel sings out with a heavenly voice
His wings black saintly open
Rises into the sky
An Amber light casts down
Lonely girl incased in glow
He whispers " Your pain I can take, leave be no longer"
Look deepest into my eyes
With one kiss upon your sweet lips
Feel my heart erasing
Then leave me go, be exist you

"Dont cry because its over, smile because it happened. "

© Copyright 2004 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2004-08-15 08:58 AM


whiskey
Good advice, good read.

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Gaia
2 posted 2004-08-15 12:27 PM


*sigh* yes, what Sy said
Susan
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3 posted 2004-08-15 12:36 PM


Fantastic imagery.  Love the last line.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Magnus
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4 posted 2004-08-15 12:51 PM


an act of acceptance and love...the fuel of
success and learning...  Well done Whiskey,
nice to read.  Thank You.

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5 posted 2004-08-15 01:07 PM


sigh
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