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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Of Touché Touché, her point had red my norm Dazzled by her racing form She parried with a ruthless ruse That skewered me and cooked my goose Of course I talk of bygone days Past horizons, youthful ways Adventures and desires roar With all the crying and the pour She streaked within a wile of nap Surprised me like a sudden slap Caught me with her naked seem Woke me from an august dream And though my eyes were open wide I could not stop the force of tide And heard myself in muffled tone Sound regret in muffled moan The shadows of an age away Escaped to rage my feet of clay |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sy darling man, this is so YOU, each word reverberates with your essence, such a beautifully written and presented piece from you darling one. Your ability to clothe these pages with such skilfully presented pieces is amazing, the rhythm and the flow of this are exquisite. An amazing piece from you darling man, absolutely outstanding I love it utterly, utterly, utterly as always Mushy    Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
"She parried with a ruthless ruse That skewered me and cooked my goose" lol, oh I do like those lines.....  You didn't ask for her to enter your dream, no man can resist a look at a streaking woman... Loved this one, Seymour ---------ice ><> |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So rapier sharp, your mind this clear even as you wake from dream so dear, fear not Sire, of your feet of clay, for daydreams await your mind this day... ~*~  I love it when you get me going! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Many feelings come to bear...as the bearer of tides lie onto the land.. I worried about you, good to see you are ok.... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Good morning, Sy...I'm glad to see you have electricity...along with poetry!  |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Touche'. Your point. Well done. susanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
another good one |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
 Enjoyed! ......jo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Mr. T. ~ I am greatful to those feet of clay of yours! You were able to hold your ground even with a screaming siren slapping your handsome face!   Love ya, sonneteering Poet! EA  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha Thank you so much for stopping by. Hope all is well with you. Ice, Enjoyed your reply, thank you. Sunshine Well it's only fair your sunshine gets me going evry morning. Barry, Not to worry, the storm didn't get here just some wind and rain. Martie The volume is getting a little weak but it's still enough. LOL Susan, Thank you dear. passing, And for that another iliana, Thank you sweet. Earth Angel Not to worry only had wind and rain. We were lucky it hit the west coast. Loveya too. |
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