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Foxyoasis
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0 posted 2004-08-14 03:58 PM


    


I would wait for you in the
pouring rain,hold your hand
forget my pain. Can't you
see that I'm falling for
you,won't you please let
me through

Smile upon your face
the laughter in your
place,the way you get
to me all I can do is
just breathe

Take a plane to get
to you,send a letter
to get through,your
the guy with the golden
touch,Oh why do I miss
you so much.

Smile upon your face
the laugther in your
place,your just like me,
both thoughful of each
other's reality

Look back on my angel,thats
you touch my sould keeps me
from the cold. Twinkle in
my step makes me sail away.

Smile upon your face,the
laughter in your place
Take me away with you
show me something new

the artwork is of my own makings


Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

[This message has been edited by Foxyoasis (08-14-2004 04:38 PM).]

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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2004-08-14 08:06 PM


thoughful of each
other's reality


love the setiment, Julie

M

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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2 posted 2004-08-15 01:22 AM


foxy -- this was great -- you're very creative!
Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2004-08-15 01:23 AM


very very nicely done, and I really like that picture!
Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
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Atlantic Beach,Fla
4 posted 2004-08-15 01:53 AM


thanks only wish he realize how much i care n special he is i think he does i dunno

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2004-08-15 02:58 AM


now this is pretty
Kevo
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since 2004-06-02
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6 posted 2004-08-15 03:41 AM


A beautiful write and a beautiful pic.  You are jack of many talents.  Your flow was refreshing and your imagery simply captivating.  The picture only added to the beauty of the painting within the text.  

Warm regards,

Kevin

Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
7 posted 2004-08-15 03:46 AM


aww thanks guys! Im going to read this to adam when I visit him I don't know when that will be. I hope he likes it

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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