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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Psyches Well My writings are a gourd of dip Your answers make my ego flip And I am carried on the kiss Of dreamers wile and phantoms bliss It takes me to an Eden’s glen Where sits a multi mother hen Hatching all my eggs of Id Warming on poetics grid Within the warmth of empathy And fed a diets sympathy It fills its needs within the spot And fattens on forsake me not But ego is a chick of flaw It never stops the cry of more And ever will it stay the nest And never will it say of rest So open up this door of awe And feed it for forevermore |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
It's been said that I can't get enough either.  (Not enough of your lovely poetry, that's for sure!)   Breakfast is on me!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, You're on for breakfast. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning Sir Seymour with the well-balanced ~ and healthy ~ id, ego, and super ego! There be not a flaw in any of yours. I would love to dip my pen into the ink of your guord! Please keep that door of awe open so that this mother hen can ooo, and ahhhh and fill your spot forever more! A great poet needs to be fed so that he can keep on producing fine works ~ and I do not doubt for one moment that you deserve the feedings that you receive each day! This was a clever, humble, and appreciative write to your readers. Thank you! May you forever enjoy the bliss of a dreamer's kiss,  EA  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel Well if you realy aren't an Angel I officially make you one now. LOL |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You can't fill the archives fast enough Sy...you've got a lot more writing to do...and me? I'm not going to count your eggs before they're hatched...into gems, just like this...  |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
It is as if, when we share our poetry, we share our souls and in the replies we receive we are embraced with acceptance. It is a warm fuzzy feeling, yes? So here are some warm fuzzies for you -- Hugs and Accolades SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine I'll do what I can and with you a little extra. Susan and warm fuzzy feelings. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
My writings are a gourd of dip --------------------------------- And here I sit with a SUPER SIZE bag of chips!!!  You are the chips and dip and the KOOLAID on the side Sy-babers... It takes me to an Eden’s glen Where sits a multi mother hen Hatching all my eggs of Id Warming on poetics grid could one verse be any cooler???? well yes...because you followed it up with this one >>>>> Within the warmth of empathy And fed a diets sympathy It fills its needs within the spot And fattens on forsake me not ~~~~ "fed a diets sympathy" "fattens on forsake me not" you rock and rhyme right on time me poet of way cool winkies LOL |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Absolutely fantastic, Seymour. You are a wonderful and thoughtful human being whose ego, I think, has ample controls! ......jo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Within the warmth of empathy And fed a diets sympathy It fills my Randys belly pot That fattens on forsake me not WWRS iliana, One never knows about an Ego. LOL Hugs |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sy You certainly have the touch to put this across with class. Excellent write! Eric |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, Thank you dear. ethome, Thank you my friend. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
But ego is a chick of flaw It never stops the cry of more And ever will it stay the nest And never will it say of rest How well I know this! LOL It's as bad as my kitty cat... that food bowl never gets quite full enough! *S* Excellent poem, my friend... I thoroughly enjoyed! *S* |
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