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An Encounter
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An Encounter |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia 
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An Encounter Two people Together came Eyes locked Lips kissed Bodies close Feelings new Desires fuelled Emotions raw Hours shared Memories made Two lives Different but The same Lust was in the air Time was not Roniece Dawson-Bruce |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Especially liked the last two lines. Well done.  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
 enjoyed this! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
oh, what an ending! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
an unexpected ending |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Roniece...James |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I enjoyed this very much Roniece, loved the way you ended it! Good to see your work again, take care!"A spring shower was cause to run |
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