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Open Poetry #33
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lovejunkie
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0 posted 2004-08-14 01:39 AM


While you're away
you and I both know
the wind won't blow
and the stars don't glow

And the time goes so slow
when you're so far away
The clocks
tick
tick
tick
and forget to tock
when we don't talk

Lovers laugh
and lovers walk

Lovers cry
and lovers pack
Lovers leave
and never come back

The Summer turns wheels
around the sidewalks we strolled
Begs us to kiss and tell
and to never grow old
Begs us to try
after you told me not to cry
Begs us to love
but not to be too bold

Because the Summer slips so slowly
when you're so far from home

"All you need is love..." -The Beatles

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1 posted 2004-08-14 03:30 AM


oh this is so sweetly heartbreaking
how i know these words...though it was long ago.

but some wounds just never heal, now do they?

blissfully love scarred?

very nice writing, enjoyed

passing shadows
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2 posted 2004-08-14 04:21 AM


I sure can relate to this
iliana
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3 posted 2004-08-15 01:19 AM


Good write, lovejunkie.
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