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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2004-08-14 12:31 PM


Worth A Try

I can't do your part,
I can only do mine.
If you can't find
a reason to try,
you're wasting
my precious time.
Next thing you know
a week, a month,
a year gone by.
What am I
worth to you
if I'm not
worth a try.

JamesLee
August13
2004
Some try harder than others.
A lack of trying sends a message
that they don't know how to
value or appreciate a relationship.
Why waste precious years of a
life with someone like that.


© Copyright 2004 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-08-14 04:51 AM


very true
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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2 posted 2004-08-14 05:38 AM


I definitely agree you are worth a try James - bravo a great piece! Ciao Bello Roniece Dawson-Bruce
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2004-08-15 05:15 PM


Thank you passing shadows and Roniece...it seems like some relationships are one sided...with one doing most of the work and the other going along for the ride...James
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