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VAS
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0 posted 2004-08-13 09:04 PM



They Always Blame the Flowers

at least that’s how it seems
yet it’s not only they
that run my nose in streams
when laundering
or dish washing
or taking out the trash

my nose goes
into overdrive
until I think I’ll crash
it’s chemicals
those chemicals
we use to clean our lives

you’d think the way
they scratch at me
I’d also have the hives

and when my kitties
use their dirt
it’s special from the store
the slightly scented
cleaning stuff
makes my nose run out some more

now granted
when I’m pulling weeds
or mowing short the grass
the dirt, the pollen,
spruce tree scents
make me sneeze each time I pass

so don’t keep blaming
what God made
for allergies and such
I think it really
is much worse
encountering what man has touched

©August 13, 2004


Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

[This message has been edited by VAS (08-13-2004 09:39 PM).]

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1 posted 2004-08-13 11:09 PM


How true Virginia! Smilin' here thru sneezes. hugs, Chris

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I love you
With a thousand hearts."


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3 posted 2004-08-14 09:52 AM


Yes! The nose knows!  Messy Sneeze

EA
Flowers

Susan
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4 posted 2004-08-14 10:52 AM


Yes, yes!  I can barely walk down the laundry soap isle in the grocery store.  Unscented is a godsend when you can find it.  Well said.  Many forget that the chemicals are as potent for allergies, probably more so, than those of nature's making.

Susan

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5 posted 2004-08-14 02:29 PM


  Bravo!  
GG
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6 posted 2004-08-15 06:59 AM


It's those nasty perfumes that get me!
I try to walk through some shops at the mall and leave in tears... they must think I'm crazy lol

Love the write!

Always, Alyssa

Poems are made by fools like me,
But only God can make a tree.
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7 posted 2004-08-15 10:09 AM


Vas
My eyes started to itch when I read this, but I'm glad I did anyway...lol

snif, snif...now my nose is running...

Well done, enjoyed
--------ice
  ><>

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8 posted 2004-08-15 11:58 AM


Hey dear lady, it seems you've drawn all of us allergy sufferers out of the corner with this write. New carpeting makes me sneeze. Perfumes make me sneeze. Sniff, I'm allergic to cat hair, hay, dust and mites, and anything made with latex. LOL. But I work at a horse barn filled with hay, cats, and dust, and half of whatI touch in the way of clothing as well as cleaning supplies contains latex. Benadryl, benadryl, cold compresses and aspirin. *sigh* I'm just glad my daughter doesn't seem to have inherited all these allergies.
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