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Sunshine
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0 posted 2004-08-13 09:02 PM




Third & Fairfax

You can’t go home again, I know this,
but still, wrapped in warm-summer scents,
memories stream from long ago…

The early sixties saw paradise draped
around palm trees and cream colored buildings,
with green roofs and a sense of welcome in

                          An emerald blue parrot perched politely, eyeing me steadily

while scents and sights of exotic orchids,
pineapple, kumquats and avacados,
huge bananas bunched on their stems,
peaches, apples, normal enough oranges
sat side by side of the unfamiliar,
and nuts with tongue twisting sounds
sat flat by flat from around the world ~

                          Look, they offer sample platters of everything…oh Mom, may I?

Turn, and pomegranates stare at you,
their inner seeds ruby red jewels,
blueberries and plums borrow color from each other,
full dates and fresh figs bring thought of camels
and wanderers, and all was a garden of wonder.

                          And Sun watched me skip-dance from stall to stall in full pretend bahama-mama skirts.

“Meet you at Third and Fairfax,” open to all,
where farmers deftly hefted cantaloupe and
strawberry flats, green grocers carried in varied
and variegated leafy lettuces of green and purple,
huge Vidalia onions vied to sweetly scent
the air like no other onion can,

                         Herbs and spices blended their sweet, pungent scents, promising long life

and you rubbed elbows with all of those visitors,
friend and friend alike, voices as subtly exotic as the gifts
of food, both common, and unusual,
draws one to smile, to anticipate
tastes and sensations, and you watch as
hands wave over sample choices of asparagus,
broccolis, fresh Swiss chard or deeply greened spinach,

and round full tomatoes swelled blood-red in the sun.

I remember sounds of music, brilliant colors,
all those strangely and unfamiliar, deeply satisfying
scents and sounds, and warm winds.

You can’t go home again,
but you can anticipate a welcome in
as you await to return to
acknowledge perpetual change.

I’ll meet you at the Farmers Market.

~*~


[This message has been edited by Sunshine (08-14-2004 07:46 AM).]

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1 posted 2004-08-13 09:05 PM


I remember shopping there.
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2 posted 2004-08-13 09:09 PM


deliciously painted, Dear Sunshine!!!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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3 posted 2004-08-13 10:40 PM


Neat topic, Sunshine, but I have to admit I'm trying to diet.  The calories just poured on while I read this!  Yum!  You're wicked!  I just swam a mile and you do this to me!  Food! Food! Where is that Farmer's Market?  Third and Fairfax you say?  (I'd lie if I didn't tell you it was a pleasure to read. Enjoyable...)
                      Missie
                  

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4 posted 2004-08-13 11:11 PM


We're off to our Farmer's Market to-morrow morning! Love this Karilea. hugs, Chrislane

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I love you
With a thousand hearts."


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5 posted 2004-08-14 02:39 PM


Man-o-Man am I hungry for fresh vegetables and fruits!  Sunshine, this was an absolutely beautiful array of flavor and a delight to the senses!     *hugs*...SILly jo
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6 posted 2004-08-14 02:47 PM


i must say this here is the mark of a true poetic master.. maybe one day i could write as well as that
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7 posted 2004-08-15 12:21 PM


Drooooooooooooooool
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8 posted 2004-08-15 01:01 AM


Karilea

I has been years since I went to that Farmer's Market...thanks for the memory!  

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9 posted 2004-08-15 02:57 AM


oh i remember going to the farmers market where im from....everything seemed so big then.

and all the yummy things to eat...especially
the pommegranites..

little red fingers
picking at the juicy seeds

mmmm...

really enjoyed this
so satisfying
body and soul

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10 posted 2004-08-15 02:59 AM


I think every hometown has a Farmers Market
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11 posted 2004-08-15 04:03 AM


WOW! You sure describe the scene so well.

The reader can hear, smell & touch the very images you have listed and delivered so delightfully.

I love the market and all the smells sights and sounds.

Great stuff!

Eric

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12 posted 2004-08-15 10:17 AM


Excellent poetry, Karilea...:-)
Reminds me of "The Goblin Market" for some reason?
enjoyed
--------ice
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13 posted 2004-08-15 10:35 AM


YES< YES,....YES again....

Loved this,  so visual...I almost started
smelling and hearing things from that
corner of life..

The good/nice thing is we both write of similar times of life....and that makes
personification that much more precious
in what is read.

Thanx Sun One...and I would have forgiven
you for commenting in a teaching way of
my poem,  

Barry/BJ/Nitwit..

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14 posted 2004-08-15 04:16 PM


I've been to many a farmer's market over the years, but a small one in Connecticut was my first.  The smells of produce that was on the vine or in the ground within 24 hours can't be beat.  Perhaps they got me into gardening.  Well done. KJ

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The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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15 posted 2004-08-16 06:14 PM


We've a farmer's market like this in the next town, where there are large populations of Filipinos and Mandarin peoples.

Lots of green things I've never seen and wouldn't know how to cook, but nothing quite as exotic as this. It had me thinking of a farmer's market in Hawaii.


Corinne

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16 posted 2004-08-16 06:49 PM


nice read
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