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"The Seduction"
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"The Seduction" |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
As silent as a feather glides, our nightly tryst begins, her silken touch a strangle-hold, that seeks to draw me in. To slip into her soft embrace and sensuously slide, her every wish is my command, her summons, I'll abide. She promises that servitude will be its' own reward, demands that vows shall be renewed by those who would explore the subtleties she's visited upon her willing slaves, before the alter of the bed fulfills all that is craved. So fluid are her movements, she inspires one to write, seductively, she whispers secrets hidden from the light. I lay supine before her in anticipations' pose, awaiting subjugation, as a captive in her throes. No shame shall I confess to for the company I keep, my "Lady of the Evening" is the "Mistress" known as sleep. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
William this is absolutely an outstanding write and the ending topped it off perfectly! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 what a totally gorgeous write!I'll keep this sleep(ing) beauty. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Doc You have a good bedside manner....the end of this brought a smile...thank you! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
well, whata way to go...in the arms of dreams...smiles....very much enjoyed this one |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So fluid are her movements, she inspires one to write, seductively, she whispers secrets hidden from the light. I lay supine before her in anticipations' pose, awaiting subjugation, as a captive in her throes. ~*~ Sometimes, insomnia from those very whispers occur... but that nether time...is a good time... Well done, Doc! |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
WEll moose...the company you keep could be worse....then a real mistress or lack of sleep or sleep..just think?..Ya could be best friends with a damned old Toerag!!!! |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Gentle Spirit, Midnitesun, Martie, LeeJ, Sunshine, Toerag. Many names I recognize, and thank you much for your replies. Doc |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Tremendous. Enjoyed very much. TD |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Lend to me your mistress fair so willing is her aim to please-- Let her fill the what's-not-there and tantalize serenity with promises of dreams, there I, can find an "almost anything"-- Oh lend to me your mistress fair and prayeth all tonight I sleep... "So mote it be." typed the witch. Oh wow. Does that make you a witch doctor? HEAL ME.  (I could very much relate to this'n doc, in fact, if your verse and my verse should ever get together, I claim dibs on the first of the offspring.) Ambien is a nice name and gender neutral, too, methinks! (I really do need sleep.) Loved this.  sheesh |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Loved it, Doc! Wonderful ending! ....jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow...that's good |
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