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The Sky |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Sky The sky is made of naught and star One of thwart and one too far And one that sails within its deem Is out on bail or in a dream A spirits wile of fantasy That holds the guile of lunacy And they’re within the omni rush You pan the gold within the brush It glitters like a phantoms sky And flutters like a butterfly And neither one is true of source Or indicates the brew of course It turns within a perigee On symbols of the obligee It is a synthesis of prime Fireflies of sands of time A fool’s swag of pyrite gleam Collected in a bag of dream |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine   |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
yuppers.... Good Morning, kiddo great Friday morning shuffle my friend Your a wonder...thank you for sharing Happy Friday! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
ohhhh...I love this Sey! Rhyme divine, I just love it. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Good morning sweet and thank you for the read. Gentle Spirit, You really are a gentle Spirit.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
master sy, this soft sided rhyme is white clouds on a window with the sky behind dug it sir |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Ahh, g-r-e-a-t write!!! jwesley |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark, There is nothing like a dig for a fantasy sprig. LOL Thank you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
jwesley You warm my heart, thank you. |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
G'morning!!! Playful stuff, fun to read....~P |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
choshi So glad you enjoyed. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vandana Thank you dear. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Fireflies of sands of time" "A fool’s swag of pyrite gleam Collected in a bag of dream" ~ Has anyone ever told you that you are a poet? lol  Sending you sky wishes and star dreams of pure gold! EA  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Would you believe my bag of dreams went up in smoke?  Sure you would.  love ya seymour!  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sometimes, pyrite is prettier than the real thing. At least, it is here! No, I think this is the real thing!  ....jo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel So far you are the only one that told me I was a poet. And I thank you. serenity, Your real gold is in your mind and there is no smoke there. iliana Did you know gold is not yellow, but pink just like you. |
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