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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2004-08-12 08:10 PM

A Meadow I Call Eternity

Somewhere in the magic of the black forest
my sweetheart is far away from me,
in the meadow where she found me,
a meadow I call eternity.

How was I to know that her lovers potion
would only bless a man of total devotion.

Now I search for her love
but she doesn't want for me.
I had my chance for
love and romance,
until my wayward heart
broke us apart
in a meadow I
call eternity.

JamesLee
August08
2004

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2004-08-12 08:15 PM

Well done JM,  I believe that is how it is,
isn't it....and I would surmise that perhaps
it will be an eternity before....

Whatcha think?

Good write,  enjoyed it.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2004-08-13 12:39 PM

Whoa! Now, JamesLee, this is most curious and I am wondering if this is Susie. Really beginning to believe you met a real, living muse.

....jo

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2004-08-13 12:51 PM

Thank you Magnus and iliana...indeed she is real and exciting, sensual and inviting.
However when I write, I write of past, present and future...especially when I write of women I care for or have cared for or want to care for, I write of experiences I've had, experiences I want to have and experiences I will have...some based on truth and some fantasy...hope this makes some sense...James

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2004-08-13 10:10 AM

yes James, your entire composition makes sense, and more so, enscribing a lesson well learned, sometimes like children, we have to allow our hearts to feel the pain in order to receive blessings

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

5 posted 2004-08-13 10:11 AM

enjoyed

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2004-08-13 06:44 PM

JamesMichael~
You are soooooooooo tenderly romantic~
May all your 'pasts-todays-and futures' continue to give us such insight to your heart~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

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