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froggy
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0 posted 2004-08-12 03:07 PM



Dance Of Love
Reaching out I claimed your hand,
we began to dance.

fingers caressing
lips meeting
whispered words
two hearts beating as one.

The music plays on as you
slow danced me to the end of love.

© Copyright 2004 E.Griswold - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2004-08-12 06:21 PM


Froggy~
This is a soft, astoundingly lovely piece of word-art~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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froggy
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2 posted 2004-08-12 10:27 PM


Thank-you Marge for the wonderful sweet comment.

Hugs to you.

:-)

iliana
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3 posted 2004-08-13 12:22 PM


I love to dance and understand the feelings.  Enjoyed this, froggy.   ...jo
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2004-08-13 12:32 PM


Enjoyed...James
froggy
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5 posted 2004-08-13 03:04 PM


Thank-you Jo for the sweet comment.

Thank-you JamesMichael. Glad you enjoyed the read.

:-)

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