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Rick
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0 posted 2004-08-12 08:56 AM



Reflections mirror from a pond
But I look past them and beyond
To see what lies behind my mind
Which often I just cannot find

Reflections ripple and increase
To fill the pond in puzzled piece
As fuzzy as the world can be
Till movements calm and I can see

And I reflect on everyday
The ripples that take calm away
Waiting for that time for me
When once again the calm I see

© Copyright 2004 Rick Van Weenen - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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1 posted 2004-08-12 08:59 AM


I'll share that part of my mind with you, if you share yours with me...temendous write Rick, and seriously...enjoy really enjoy, talking with people

Tremendous pen sir...Good morning

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2004-08-12 09:00 AM


Rick
Circles upon circles, you're making progress. LOL enjoyed

Rick
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3 posted 2004-08-12 09:14 AM


Dear Lee, I believe I am sharing it with you now my friend, I find little or for some reason give myself too little time to spend talking, it is hard to change habit when not used to it. This would be the most time I take and I love it, thank you so much for your reply, I really enjoy them, take care my friend and be well.

Dear Seymour, great to see you my friend, thanks for the reply, again very much appreciated.

Sincerely
Rick

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4 posted 2004-08-12 12:23 PM


Rick, I have thought of it that way many times, but never could put it on paper

I am enjoying your company here


Rick
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5 posted 2004-08-12 04:38 PM


Dear Dixie, your company is always a treat and your replies always wonderful, thanks for the visit dear friend, be well and have a great day.

Sincerely
Rick

iliana
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6 posted 2004-08-13 12:24 PM


This mirror of you looking in the pond was a very good read, Rick.  It has its own calming influence.   ...jo
Rick
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7 posted 2004-08-13 11:55 PM


iliana, thank you for replying, great to see you here my friend, be well and take care. Your thoughts are always so much appreciated.

Sincerely
Rick

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Rick
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9 posted 2004-08-17 07:03 AM


Dear Dixie, thanks for another bump up, always great to see you here.

Sincerely
Rick

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